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From The Chrysalis BREW Project: Dive Bartender: Flowers in the Desert by T.K. O’Neill takes us on a roller-coaster ride. The hair-raising action sequences, the breathtaking descriptions of the desert, and the uninhibited consumption of drugs and alcohol actually made me feel like I was living in the wild west of the seventies.

Frank’s head was on a swivel, searching the nearly empty, Old West-themed streets for cop cars, motels, all-night restaurants or anything that might provide an alternative to the present situation.

But mostly cop cars…

The local cops had a reputation for hard-ass behavior, the Gold Dust Twins had said earlier in the evening.

Not knowing what else to do, Frank kept cruising around, sweat dripping from his armpits one cold drop at a time.

And then Evelyn was pointing across the way at a grand old structure that looked like it’d been there since the fifties, Frank thinking maybe Frank Sinatra, Dean Martin and the Rat Pack had comped suites for life.

Sign on the front said, Hotel Valley Ho.

“I could get a room there,” Evelyn said, the words struggling to come out. “Always wanted to get a look inside that place.”

Frank looked at the dashboard clock.

Nearly four a.m.

And the needle on the wagon’s temperature gauge was up way too high all of a sudden.

What the hell?

Must be a coolant leak, he thought. All the hot weather taking its toll.

And that fancy hotel had to cost two hundred a night, at least. And Evelyn would need another blast to go through the lobby and maybe want another when they got to the room and then Frank would be stuck in there listening to a bunch of coke-and-Tuinal-fueled nonsense until she could go home and Frank could get the fuck out of town.

So the Valley Ho wasn’t going to work, no matter how cool it looked.

Frank kept on driving, the Hater back front and center in his head and letting him know what he thought of all this.

Hater wasn’t very kind.

And then, just as suddenly as the lights had appeared upon reentering Scottsdale, the surroundings got darker and the buildings became fewer and farther in between.

Frank’s eyes were jumping from the temperature gauge—needle precariously close to the red line now—to Evelyn’s nodding head and then back to the dark streets. Repeating the cycle every few seconds

Then—hallelujah—he caught sight of what seemed to be a major artery. A north-south highway according to the compass mounted on the Ford’s dash, one of the former owner’s additions to the wagon’s accessory package.

His hands sweaty on the wheel; Frank approached the highway cautiously and was uplifted by the sight of a neon sign on a frontage road to his right.

Tru West Motel.

Icy AC.

Cable TV.

In-room phones.

A place only Norman Bates could love.

Frank swung in the lot, stopped in front of the Office sign.

Evelyn looked at him from behind her haze. “You gotta be shitting me,” she said, her lips slack. Then her head lolled against the car door and she was out.

Frank was grateful for the small favor.

He got out and went up to the office door, wondering if he’d be able to raise anyone at this hour. There was a button on the wall next to the door. Sign below it said Push for After-hours Service.

He pressed it and heard a faint ringing behind the door.

He shuffled his feet and looked back at Evelyn.

Still out.

He waited.

Time passed slowly.

Behind him a few cars went by, lights reflecting on the motel’s windows.

Feeling antsy, he pushed the button again and heard the bell.

“All right, I hear ya. Hold your horses,” said a voice.

The door opened.

Guy standing there in a thin baby blue robe over a white strap undershirt. Small feet in old-time brown slippers. Fit Frank’s idea of someone who’d own a place like this. Short and fat, with a white beard, horn-rimmed glasses askew on a gin blossom nose and a scowl on his face that let you know he wasn’t a jolly, roly-poly type of guy, even though he kind of resembled Santa Claus.

Of the department store variety.

But who could blame the guy? Four in the morning confronted by a big stranger with booze on his breath and—Frank looking at his hands now—bloodied knuckles. The result of scraping against Bryce Parker’s teeth. And, oops, there was some blood on the top of his Adidas sneaker.

“Sorry to bother you at this hour, sir,” Frank said, polite. “But my wife and I have been driving all night—we’re from Minnesota—and—”

“You need a room. Hell else you’d want at this hour?” He stepped outside and looked at Frank’s car, checking the front license plate and peering in at Evelyn.

“My wife’s asleep. We’ve been on the road since Colorado.”

“All right,” Desert Santa said, giving Frank a sure-you-have look. “That’ll be fifty dollars. In advance. Checkout time is noon. You wanna stay longer it’ll cost you extra.”

Frank pulled his wallet from the pocket of his khakis and thumbed out two twenties and a ten.

“Gotta come in and fill out the card,” the guy said.

(End of Chapter 33)

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From SPR Review: “Love, loss, brotherhood, and purpose clash in a timeless examination of freedom through a drug-addled lens. With a clever and original flourish for simple, unexpected descriptions, the prose hums along at an even clip, occasionally taking time to wax poetic, à la Kerouac, with the urgency in Frank’s mind and movements reminiscent of Sal Paradise, if not Dean Moriarty. Comparisons aside, this book is far from derivative; it is a refreshing homage to beatnik life, telling an accessible story with a familiar lesson – you can’t go home again, and home is wherever you make it.”  

Rolling across the pitch black desert in the station wagon, dust cloud in the rearview glowing taillight-red, giant cacti looming beyond the arc of the headlights like lost soldiers in Pancho Villa’s army, Frank could only shake his head at the turn the evening had taken.

All because of the young girl on his right, her nose full of white powder and her belly full of booze and downers.

But no, that wasn’t really accurate.

What went down was all because of the predatory behavior of two overly entitled white guys with too much money and too few values.

Guys who believed it their right to take what they wanted without concern for the consequences.

But, hey, they weren’t the Hillside Stranglers, as Clayton Cook had so fervently declared.

Frank’s mind switched gears and began working on the thorny problem of what to do now.

“You got some place to go, Evelyn, some place I can take you?”

“No, not really,” Evelyn replied, her jaw set at an angle and her eyes momentarily wide and staring in the glow of the dash lights.

“Whattaya mean, no not really? You haven’t got a home? Come on, I’m just trying to help here.”

“Of course I have a home, pendejo. I share an apartment with my brother Javier.”

There was that ben decko shit again.

“Good, I’ll take you there. But you have to tell me the way. I’m not from around here.”

“Really,” she said, sarcasm dripping from her words like wax from a candle, “I never would have known. Your car is just like the cars in my neighborhood—old and shitty.”

Girl using sarcasm? She must be doing better than he’d thought. “It’s not shitty. It’s reliable. Trustworthy. Just like me. Now tell me how to get to your apartment.”

“No.”

“Excuse me?”

“I stutter or something?”

“Just give me directions.”

“I give you directions out here in the desert, you’ll just forget them by the time we get to Phoenix.”

Frank couldn’t help himself and broke into song: “ By the time I get to Phoenix, she’ll be waiting.”

Evelyn made a face. “You got a permit for that voice? Permit to carry a tune? Think you’re in violation, Jack.”

“Name’s Frank. Give me the directions when we get back to civilization then.”

“Javier finds out I’ve been doing drugs, he’ll slap me around.”

“Your brother beats you?”

“Only if he catches me doing dope. Both our parents are dead and Javier thinks he has to play father to me. Even though he’s younger. I’ve had some trouble with drugs in the past, so I guess he has a right. I can drink as much as I want and he doesn’t say a damn thing, but he finds out I’ve had one taste of coke or a pill or something, he blows his cork.”

“Where would you like me to drop you then?”

“I dunno. Hotel?”

“Got any money?”

“Few bucks.”

“Nice. Sweet. Just fuckin’ dandy. How old are you, Evelyn?”

“Twenty-two.”

“Got ID?” You’ve been a bartender for ten years, you have to ask.

“I need ID to ride in this piece of shit?”

“Never mind. I’ll take your word for it.”

But Jesus, look at her, she looks seventeen.

If that.

He could see the state trooper shining a flashlight in the window at the dangerously young girl with booze on her breath and white powder on the edge of her nostrils. And then the light hits the loaded handgun on the front seat.

Night plinking in the desert, son?

Then the cop shines the light on the face of the driver—a much older man— forty, at least.

Only thirty-six, Frank was thinking as he tossed Larry’s pistol out the car window.

And what, pray tell, is the age of consent in Arizona?

For an answer he got an image of Clayton Cook: “Old enough to bleed, old enough to butcher.”

Pleasant.

“You got any tunes in this car?” Evelyn said, still showing signs of life.

“Radio doesn’t work.”

“Shitty car, like I said. Even the campesinos have a radio.”

Frank jammed on the brakes and the wagon skidded to a halt. “You want to get out and walk?” he said, feeling like what he imagined the father of a teen-ager might feel.

He watched her look out the window at the blackness. Saw a couple pairs of eyes looking back.

Arizona coyotes.

She laughed. A guffaw, a snort and a girlish giggle. “No thanks. I know you won’t leave me, you have kind eyes.”

“Okay, you got me.”

He hit the gas.

Few minutes later, glancing at Evelyn, he could see she was starting to fade again, her eyes getting heavy and her head lolling forward like one of those bobblehead dolls people were putting in their back windows. “You know, Evelyn, your friend Clayton put Tuinals in your drink.”

“Toenails in my drink, ew.”

“No, honey, Tu-i-nals. It’s a barbiturate.”

“Barbershit?”

“Sleeping pills.”

Fuckin’ lumiosos. Now I need a toot.” She stuck her hand in her purse and came out with the coke bag, pinched a wad between thumb and forefinger and sniffed it in.

“Okay, honey, that’s enough for now. Wipe off your nose and give me the coke. We’ll be back in town pretty soon and we can’t have the policia seeing you snort up. Definitely not cool.”

Frank was keeping track of her snorting; determining that she needed a toot about every fifteen minutes just to stay reasonably coherent.

Time to cut her off and hope she passed out.

“Stop calling me honey,” she said, handing over the bag of powder.

“You got it, swee—ah—Evelyn.”

And before too long, miraculous as it seemed at the time, they came upon some lighted streets Frank halfway remembered.

And then, more miracles, they were somehow back in front of the Neon Cactus, the club now looking eerily vacant, surrounding streets empty and clean as if no one had been there for a week.

(To be continued)

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